The Minion Monster

The Minion Monster

By: Emma Atkins

One scary night, I was putting on my minion goggles and waiting for Bizzie to get here, but surprisingly I wasn’t the one late. I was kinda happy she wasn’t here yet, I was kinda scared of what her costume would be, okay maybe I was scared. I would scream the loudest scream ever if she was a clown, I hate clowns so much. I had never been trick or treating with her before I was really scared. I didn’t know what would happen next…

Bizzie finally got here and I thought to myself “ Its about time,” I said and walked to the door nervously. I guess Bizzie got tired of waiting because she had walked in and she was.. a CLOWN. I screamed and ran for my life screaming “ CLOWN CLOWN DONT EAT ME AHH! ” She took off the mask “Hahaha I got you so good!” I came back in the living room and I was really mad at her and I may or may not have screamed at her, but it was all over now because we walked out of the house nervously.

Bizzie was Dorthy from The Wizard of Oz and she had her dog Blanch as Toto. We were really excited well she was I was scared, but I knew that Bizzie wasn’t. We went to Haney’s Haunted House just to start out the night and it was the most awesome haunted house ever! And all you need to go in is $1.00 and you just went to the best haunted house ever! After the haunted house was over we walked and walked and walked and walked, yet we didn’t get any candy. We decided to go to a certain neighborhood that was really scary “This house!” Bizzie said. “NOOO!” I said. I never wanted to go into that house ever ever ever after I heard the story of the ghost and that it was the most terrible things that happened in that house. And of course Bizzie pulled me in, you would think is someone heard screaming like that someone would come, but nobody did. I was really scared, like really. So, we walked in to the scary haunted house that wasn’t Haney’s Haunted House and wondered if we would make it out..

We walked up the old creeky stairs and watched and waited for something to come out of hiding. “Im scared” I said. “ Well I don’t care, we are getting candy this year.” “Im leaving,” I said. “Nope,” of course she had to make me stay. We saw something and we were so scared, okay I was so scared, but still. Then, all of a sudden a man appeared right in front of us and we both screamed “Don’t move,” Bizzie said.

“I wont,” I said. The minion started to run after us! We started to run as fast as we could. “Well we know its not a zombie,” I said. “Emma this isn’t the time for jocks,” “I dont care,” I said. “AHHHHH,” I screamed. “ HURRY!” Bizzie said. We ran and ran until we were safe, well we thought we were. The minion came to us and I grabbed it and hit it with a piece of candy. The minion started crying and I was sad that it was hurt, but it hurt us alot so I knew we had to. A best friend is worth your candy and hurting something you love.

3 thoughts on “The Minion Monster

  1. Hi, my name is Dimitriy from Lancaster, PA. I wish there were periods in the places that they were supposed to be and commas in place of periods, but other wise everything else was good. I also like how you made the monster chase them until they ran out of breath and whacked it with a piece of candy. I wonder if you will make a second one.

    • Thank you for telling me I guess I never realized that I had so many periods, I will try to fix it up. Thank you so much I might make a second one, I never thought about making one so thank you so much! Thanks for commenting!

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